Hadrian AP Claim [2]

[Hadrian]

Main Class: Sorcerer

Main Class Claims: The darkness within (solo) - 579, 1455, 1448

Total Word Count:

• 579 * 2 = 1158
• 1455 * 2 = 2910
  
• 1448 * 2 = 2896
  
• 1158 + 2910 + 2896 = 6964
  

Main Class AP Claimed: 27.856

Link to Previous Claim: First AP claim woo

Pre-Claim AP:
Sorcerer: - 7
Blacksmith: - 0
Scholar: - 16

Post-Claim AP:
Sorcerer: - 34
Blacksmith: - 0
Scholar: - 16

Final Levels:
Sorcerer Level: - 14
Blacksmith Level: - 1
Scholar Level: - 9

Requested Skill(s):
Orb of Lava - Tier I Skill

• A ranged Fire-element magic that hurls a fist-sized orb of lava onto enemies. This lava ball bounces across enemy targets, dealing damage on impact. Since this skill is Fire-based, this is very effective against enemies weak against fire. One well-known trait of this skill is that it does not affect allies during combat, making it a popular skill among players. This skill has a casting time of 2 seconds and a cooldown of 20 seconds.

Frost Spear - Tier I Skill

• Impales a single target using an icicle spear for Ice-element damage. This skill inflicts a slowing debuff on the target, as well as increasing its defense for the duration. Many players learn this skill for its balance of damage, casting time, and utility that is a notch above most Sorcerer skills. This skill has a casting time of 2 seconds and a cooldown of 15 seconds.

Icicle Impale - Tier I Skill

• Elemental enchantment. The Sorcerer enchants a weapon with the ice element, causing it to glow blue and seemingly crystallize as though it were encased in ice. If an opponent's weapon makes direct contact with the enchanted weapon at this time, it will freeze and become more difficult to wield, lowering the opponent's attack speed. Likewise, if the enchanted blade comes in direct contact with the opponent's body, the opponent will be slowed for a little while. This skill has a casting time of 4 seconds, a duration of 300 seconds, and a cooldown of 60 seconds. If this skill is used on a weapon that is already affected by an elemental enchant, the previous elemental enchantment is overwritten.

[Dwarf]

Two issues with your claim Hadrian

Your forumla is wrong, you actually double your WC for all threads! This isn't a huge issue, just alter the numbers and it's approved since your WC is otherwise spot on!

The bigger issue is that your not using the standard claiming template for your AP report. Even if you are not claiming for your subclasses, you still need to include the relivent information within your claim, especially your Pre-Post AP and final levels. This is essencally the documentation for your character, so it helps if you keep it continous so that the information is avalible in the first claim I check.

NOT APPROVED, but very close!

[Hadrian]

Thank you for the corrections. I think the template should be correct now.

[Amaterasu]

Approved

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