Kuro's 3rd AP-claim

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Main Class: Assassin

Main Class Claims:

Cowboys and Sorcerers
574
582
451
395

An Evening Stroll
275
338
301
268
347
440
558
383
277
526
593
491
452
289

Total Word Count: 7540
Main Class AP Claimed: 30 AP

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Craft Subclass: Pharmacist

Craft Subclass Claims: ---


Total Word Count: 0
Craft Class AP Claimed: 0

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RP Subclass: Hitman

RP Subclass Claims: ---


Total Word Count: 0
RP Class AP Claimed: 0

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Total Claim:

Link to Previous Claim: Right here gents
Pre-Claim AP: 24
Main Class: - 30 AP

Craft Subclass: - 0 AP

RP Subclass: - 0 AP


Post-Claim AP: 54

Main Class: - 54 AP

Craft Subclass: - 0 AP

RP Subclass: - 0 AP


Final Levels:


Main Class Level: - 19

Craft Subclass Level: - 1

RP Subclass Level: - 1

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Requested Skill(s):


Quick Draw: A skill focused on delivering a quick strike at the opponent. By gripping the weapon tightly and locking one's gaze toward a nearby foe, the player's body will quickly dash over to the target and perform an attack. Alternately used by ranged users to fire projectiles at a faster than usual pace. This sudden movement takes many unprepared opponents by surprise. This skill has an animation time of 1 second and a cooldown of 15 seconds.


Trinket Work: A skill focused on decreasing the player's aggro presence. By crouching down and holding the stance for a few moments, the player will release a visible purple aura from their body for ten seconds. For the duration of the aura, the player will be able to attack a monster while keeping the monster's aggro level upon the player low. This skill is effective in a party for when one wishes to perform attacks without attracting the attention of the enemy. This skill has an duration of 30 seconds at base level. Its duration increases to 40 seconds when the Assassin reaches Level 30, 50 seconds when the Assassin reaches Level 60, and finally 60 seconds when the Assassin reaches Level 90. Its casting time is 2 seconds and its cooldown is 60 seconds.


Accel Dance: Physical Attack. The sister skill to Deadly Dance, focusing in increasing the Assassin’s speed rather than their power. As the Assassin strikes their foes, they enter a state of mind where they can release some of their body’s natural limiters, allowing them to increase the speed of their attacks by 10%. The repeated usage allows the Assassin to descend deeper into this state and increase their attack speed even further. While originally designed for melee attacks, as it is more of a state of mind, the technique can be applied to ranged attacks as well. This skill has a duration of 30 seconds, a cast time of 2 seconds and a cooldown of 10 seconds. The Assassin may spend an additional 2 seconds casting this skill to increase attack speed by 20% instead. If Accel Dance is used while it is currently in effect, attack speed is not increased further but the buff's duration will reset back to its full 30 seconds.
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On a lot of your posts, you are using quotes from other people. You cannot count other people's words in your posts, and it is difficult for people to grade. Please revise your posts so that you are not using other people's words, and it will be easier to grade.

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I guess you didn't realize I used the lower count which is the one where I "removed" the quations. (explained in the 1st "An Evening Stroll" post where I used quations)

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Kuro, that's not how we grade. We copy the entire post to verify word count, and 9/10 times we don't read your notes. Please revise your posts accordingly. And please do so for both threads.

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Pending.

I am sorry but I find your posts to be too confusing to accurately do. I am not going to go through every single post deleting the parts that aren't your words just to determine the accurate word count. Not only is that massively time consuming when there are a dozen or more claims to be done but it's just plain difficult to tell what words to keep and what ones not to. For example, the very first post you have listed I came up with 527 words versus your 607. While I don't necessarily agree with the way Sayha explained it, she's more or less accurate. As mods, we check the posts you link to and confirm the word count, mostly by copying and pasting into a word counter program. You should absolutely get into the habit of simply not copying other peoples words into your posts at all and it would completely eliminate this confusion and extra work. It will be easier for you, as well, because you won't have to try and calculate it, either.

One way to do this is when someone is talking to your character, you summarize their words and actions into your own. It creases your word count, too. For example, lets say Bob and Sally are discussing plans for something. Bob says to Sally in his post. "Hey Sally, I think we should sneak around the back and then ambush them." When Sally goes to make her post, instead of copying this line which she did not write, she can instead write something like this in her post. Bob spoke to her, suggesting that they should try and surprise the monsters by circling around behind them in a sneak attack. It still gets it across that Bob spoke to Sally but now the words are written by Sally and not just taken from Bob's post directly. This can be claimed for AP by Sally now.

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Nov 1, 2015 1:11:20 GMT @sugar said:

Pending.

I am sorry but I find your posts to be too confusing to accurately do. I am not going to go through every single post deleting the parts that aren't your words just to determine the accurate word count. Not only is that massively time consuming when there are a dozen or more claims to be done but it's just plain difficult to tell what words to keep and what ones not to. For example, the very first post you have listed I came up with 527 words versus your 607. While I don't necessarily agree with the way Sayha explained it, she's more or less accurate. As mods, we check the posts you link to and confirm the word count, mostly by copying and pasting into a word counter program. You should absolutely get into the habit of simply not copying other peoples words into your posts at all and it would completely eliminate this confusion and extra work. It will be easier for you, as well, because you won't have to try and calculate it, either.

One way to do this is when someone is talking to your character, you summarize their words and actions into your own. It creases your word count, too. For example, lets say Bob and Sally are discussing plans for something. Bob says to Sally in his post. "Hey Sally, I think we should sneak around the back and then ambush them." When Sally goes to make her post, instead of copying this line which she did not write, she can instead write something like this in her post. Bob spoke to her, suggesting that they should try and surprise the monsters by circling around behind them in a sneak attack. It still gets it across that Bob spoke to Sally but now the words are written by Sally and not just taken from Bob's post directly. This can be claimed for AP by Sally now.

I AM planning to reedit them, but did not have the time to do so irl. I am really sorry I had/have planned to update here when it's done so.

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Ok, I've done it. Removed all the "quotations".

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Approved [1/2]

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Thank for editing and adjusting those more me, it's much easier this way for everyone. Also in the future, please use the second link when you link to posts, the one that says Link to only this post. Sometimes using the other one links to weird places. : )

30 AP added to Assassin for a total of 54 AP equaling level 19. 3 skill slots unlocked.

Approved.