[Guardian] Jade Florentine

[Jade]

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Jade Adventurer - Human - Guardian - Cavalier - Pharmacist - ♀ [attr="class","equipicon"] [attr="class","equipdescription"]Starter Platemail: Level 1 Armor "A basic set of plate armor made from cheap iron. They are not really too protective, but they are better than going naked—probably. You probably do want to replace these asap, when you think about it." [attr="class","equipicon"] [attr="class","equipdescription"]Starter Spear: Level 1 Weapon "A starter weapon designed for novice adventurers, made out of cheap iron and wood. It is well-balanced and easy to use but doesn’t hit particularly hard at all. You probably should get this replaced as soon as you can." [attr="class","equipicon"] [attr="class","equipdescription"]Starter Great Shield: Level 1 Shield "A starter great shield designed for novice adventurers, made out of cheap iron. It is well-balanced and easy to use but doesn’t really feel too sturdy. Its distinctively huge size allows for good protection if somewhat unwieldy. You probably should get this replaced as soon as you can." [attr="class","equipicon"] [attr="class","equipdescription"]Accessory Name: Level # Accessory Description. [attr="class","equipicon"] [attr="class","equipdescription"]Accessory Name: Level # Accessory Description. [attr="class","equipicon"] [attr="class","equipdescription"]Accessory Name: Level # Accessory Description. [attr="class","equipicon"] [attr="class","equipdescription"]Accessory Name: Level # Accessory Description. REAL NAME. Jade Florentine REAL GENDER. Female AGE. 18 SEXUALITY. Bisexual FACE-CLAIM. Beedrill Gijinka SERIES/ARTIST. Takeshima Nia PLAYED BY. Aira [attr="class","infotitle"]Appearance [attr="class","infobox"] Jade in real life is just a less cute version of her avatar. She had fun making it look like something from one of the games her sibling played. She had made her character like her but an idealized version, how she wished she looked with inspiration from the character. The yellow and black clothes were cute, and her sister had suggested at some point she get little wings. So she promised she would. After all it was her sister that helped her build her character. She is 5'7 and of slim build. She liked to wear cute clothes when not out on adventure, so if she is seen in town then she most likely doesn't have her armor on. [attr="class","infotitle"]Personality [attr="class","infobox"] Jade is confident and strong, tough and always taking on seemingly everything. She has had to be, because of her life thus far. This game is no different, she has taken to those she has gotten to known and made sure they are taken care of. She strives to protect those who will let her and even those that don't. She is use to it because of her family. She always has a smile and doesn't complain. It has become second nature to her really, she enjoys taking care of others. She did it for so long for her family, it became second nature to do it here. Plus it kept her mind of her worries. She gets along with pretty much everyone, her gut seems to be really good at reading people. Jade watches out for those she has decided under her care, and with her gut, she finds her self good at reading people. This has enabled her to watch over her family in real life and in the game know who to let into her life and who to avoid. Generally if on first meet she likes someone she will help them should they need it. She takes promises very seriously and as such always honors what she has promised. [attr="class","infotitle"]History [attr="class","infobox"] Jade came from a large family, she was often the one taking care of them when her dad and mom were at work. She spent most of her time making sure everyone was fed and doing their homework It came natural for her though as it was just one of her jobs. She was good at it making sure to keep track of each and every one of her family. That is the problem, she worries about how they might be faring without her. She doesn't let anyone know that though, it is her own burden to bear instead she is the person to look out for some of the younger players. She knows many of them were younger and makes sure to lend a hand when possible. She spends most of her absent thoughts towards her family hoping they are ok without her. She is pretty sure her younger brother is on top of it, he picked up her slack as he had gotten older and was the reason she was in this game, he insisted she do something for herself so she had made the cute avatar she was now. She admitted it was fun making a character but she hadn't thought much about it until she ended up in it. Her life up until now was rather boring, she cooked the meals and took care of her siblings when they were sick. She was basicly their mom as their mom worked far away and her father was barely around as well. She got the groceries and made sure that everyone was happy. She had only recently had any time to herself and that was thank to her helpful brother. She had come to love his help and was glad he had become the wonderful person he was. She hoped he was ok taking care of everyone without her. It was hard to imagine them without her but she was sure that they would make it. They had to, as she was stuck here now. Now she tried to get strong in game to help those not strong. [attr="class","infotitle"]Extra [attr="class","infobox"] She is left handed and loves helping out everyone she can.

[attr="class","bigheader]Skills [attr="class","columnheader"]MAIN CLASS SKILLs [attr="class","columnheader"]SUB-CLASS CLASS SKILLs [attr="class","columnheader"]CRAFTING CLASS SKILLs [attr="class","column"] -Knight's Heart: Toggle skill. Conventions of medieval warfare made it so that even the most heavily-armored knights tended to become the most difficult to take down, thanks to their trusty mounts. These teachings form the basis of this skill. While almost essentially a must-have for Guardian-Cavalier hybrids, it is still a fairly useful skill in the right circumstances. This skill raises the Guardian's aggro-attracting presence while in a mounted state. If this skill is used by a Guardian whose subclass is Cavalier, then they also raise a 10% bonus to their attack speed while mounted. -Anchor Howl: A loud soundwave is generated from the Guardian's position, encompassing the surrounding 5 meters in radius. This causes movement speed away from the Guardian to lower the farther away a target is. As a result, some might attempt to make a run for it by either dashing or jumping. These two actions trigger the second part of this skill, which delivers a heavy counter to punish a retreating foe. It effectively serves as a way to maintain the enemy's attention on the Guardian. This skill has an animation time of 3 seconds, maximum duration of 10 seconds, and a cooldown of 30 seconds. If the Guardian moves from their initial position, this skill is canceled. -Shield Mastery: Passive skill. As the premiere tank of Elder Tale, the Guardian's signature equip is their large shield. It's rather bulky and takes some time to get used to for most players. However, considering the Guardian's playstyle, prolonged use means that they are unparalleled in terms of wielding shields. A Guardian with this skill can equip shields with an item level of up to 5 levels higher than their own Guardian class level. -Resilience: A passive ability of the Guardian. Due to their highly defensive class role, their HP regenerates faster outside of battle compared to other classes. Additionally, they regenerate a small amount of HP within battle, every couple of seconds. This passive battle healing is not very high, but it might prove to save one's life in the long run. -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description [attr="class","column"] -Toxicity Tolerance: Pharmacists have developed a certain resistance around drugs. This skill can be toggled to make a pharmacist immune to status debuffs caused by potions. Additionally, they passively recover twice as fast from Poison and Mind status effects. -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description [attr="class","column"] -Jousting: The Cavalier's specialization in horseback combat is revealed in their greater proficiency of lance combat. Any two-handed spears or polearms wielded by the Cavalier become one-handed while they are mounted. Additionally, if the Cavalier's main class would normally penalize them from using spears or polearms, this skill allows them to use spears and polearms without penalty. -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description -Skill: Description

[attr="class","bigheader]INVENTORY [attr="class","columnheader"]Equipment [attr="class","columnheader"]Consumables & Ammunition [attr="class","columnheader"]Misc. [attr="class","column"] -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description [attr="class","column"] -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description [attr="class","column"] -Whistle: Summons the cavalier class provided mount. -Busy Bee Hairband: Level 20 Vanity Wear A simple black headband, with two little antennae sticking out from them like those of a bee. An idea inspired by Jade's little sister who helped design her character and outfit. This item was crafted to keep Jade's promise to her little sister. -Oathkeeper's Wings: Level 20 Vanity Wear A pair of wings like a bee, designed to be worn on the back of the character. They are more cute than bug like, clearly part of a costume. They are the second part of a promise to Jade's little sister and as such were crafted in order to keep that promise. -Queen Bee Dress: Level 20 Vanity Wear A simple yellow dress with a cute bee pattern black trim, with a garter belt and yellow and black thigh highs, as well as a pair of black boots. Envisioned by Jade and her little sister Katie. -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description -Item: Description

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Pending.

Hello : ) The main issue here is with your equipment. I am kind of chucking about it because you choose a Beedrill FC, who would have multiple arms as a bug and you've selected enough gear for someone with 4 arms. But, since she only gets the normal 2 arms, we've got to narrow this down.

Starter Lance - Two-Handed Spear/Polearm
Starter Spear - One-Handed Spear/Polearm
Starter Great Shield - One-Handed Shield

I was wondering if perhaps the confusion comes from this line, from the Jousting skill - "Any two-handed spears or polearms wielded by the Cavalier become one-handed while they are mounted." But that only takes effect while your character is mounted and even then, you've still got an extra arm sprouting out.

So, I think your choices here would be this, since you get 2 hands:

1) One Starter Lance, that's all. Two hands.

2) Starter Spear + Starter Great Shield. Two hands total/one in each hand.

3) Two Starter Spears. Two hands total/one in each hand.

A much lesser issue, but one still to note, is that your characters Personality is only 116 words and is supposed to be a minimum of 200. If you could, please expand on that a little.

Please make the necessary edits and then let me know once you're ready for me to look this over again. PM me, reply here, or catch me in the cbox if you have any questions.

Thanks!

[Jade]

Fixed :)  sorry about the lack of wordcount, I thought it was 100, and removed the lance, I will just buy one I suppose as its not for at the same time anyways. 



















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I believe it looks okay now, approved.