Wolf Hair
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Post by Shepard Dagon on Apr 2, 2014 10:10:58 GMT
Main Class: Shaman Main Class Claims: Preventing Damage - Post Title:
- Prevent is better than heal. (631 words)
Eyes Open for the First Time - Post Titles:
- Shepard opened his eyes just to realize he was somewhere familiar. (357 words)
- Shepard was being the center of the attention, he hated that. (
452 words) - Chaos, you say? No, just people. (601 words)
Total Word Count: 2041 WordsMain Class AP Claimed: 8 Total Claim: 8 AP Link to Previous Claim: (Just so we don't make any mis Pre-Claim AP: Main Class: - 0 AP Craft Subclass: - 0 AP RP Subclass: - 0 AP Post-Claim AP: Main Class: - 8 AP Craft Subclass: - 0 AP RP Subclass: - 0 AP Final Levels: Main Class Level: 5 - Craft Subclass Level: 1 - RP Subclass Level: 1 - Requested Skill(s): Summon Shikigami: The Shaman calls forth a shikigami, a humanoid familiar spirit, in a solid form. It is usually used in a support role, with tasks ranging from off-tanking to scouts to support DPS. There is a wide range of shikigami that a Shaman can summon, and they last for 5 minutes. In the original game, shikigami are treated as bonus content for players, with little to no practical use. However, after the Catastrophe, shikigami now share the same sensations with their masters, allowing shikigami to serve reconnaissance roles in battle. Of course, there are shikigami that well-loved by many as mascots.
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Do or do not... there is no try.
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Post by Icyferno on Apr 2, 2014 10:28:39 GMT
Preventing DamageWord count: 626 (+5) Eyes Open for the First TimeWord count: 346 (+11) + 441 (+11) + 595 (+6) Total words: 2041 AP awarded: 8 Word count is accurate, assuming I include the words at the top of the post which actually seems to be the character's feelings. Notes: First post in "Eyes Open for the First Time" is in first person for some reason, while the rest are in third person. Make up your mind. Verdict: Your AP claim has been verified. (1/2)
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Wolf Hair
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Post by Shepard Dagon on Apr 2, 2014 10:38:55 GMT
Notes: First post in "Eyes Open for the First Time" is in first person for some reason, while the rest are in third person. Make up your mind. Indeed it is, im sorry. I'm used to RP in first person, but I asked a few people about it and they told me it was more easy to read when it was written in third, so I changed the style.
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Do or do not... there is no try.
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Post by Icyferno on Apr 2, 2014 10:42:17 GMT
Notes: First post in "Eyes Open for the First Time" is in first person for some reason, while the rest are in third person. Make up your mind. Indeed it is, im sorry. I'm used to RP in first person, but I asked a few people about it and they told me it was more easy to read when it was written in third, so I changed the style. Welp, no harm done. Consistency is still the best though.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 2, 2014 11:11:35 GMT
Word Count: OK! Post Content: Appropriate as claimed.
Approved 2/2
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Post by Data Holder on Apr 8, 2014 4:01:18 GMT
Approved.
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