Noctis AP Claim [2]

[Noctis Corvo]

Main Class: Heretic



Main Class Claims:

Messier Sage? Looks Clean to Me!: log-horizon.proboards.com/thread/6522/messier-sage-looks-clean-me
[336]
[117]
[193]
Words: [706] + [10% word bonus for CA]
Final Total: [776.6]



Diggin' Up Holes: log-horizon.proboards.com/thread/6523/1-2-diggin-holes
[407]
[191]
[158]
Words: [756] + [10% word bonus for CA]
Final Total: [831.6]


Real Historical Battles: log-horizon.proboards.com/thread/6550/1-6-real-historical-battles
[209]
[459]
[601]
[404]
[323]
[117]
[444]
Words: [2617] + [10% * 3 word bonus for CA] 
Final Total: [3402.1]


Full Miasma: Brotherhood: log-horizon.proboards.com/thread/6541/1-5-full-miasma-brotherhood
[249]
[444]
[433]
Words: [1126] + [10% word bonus for CA]
Final total: [1238.6]


[still ongoing] In the Veins of Old Sleeping Giants: log-horizon.proboards.com/thread/6459/veins-old-sleeping-giants
[370]
[355]
[352]
[324]
[351]
[155]
[266]
[193]
[696]
[248]
Total: [3310] + [25% bonus as Mentor Thread]
Final Total: [4237.5]


The Patchwork Heretic: log-horizon.proboards.com/thread/6332/patchwork-heretic

Words: [336]


Awakening: log-horizon.proboards.com/thread/6236/awakening-day-closed
[190]
[359]
Total: [549]


On The Night of the Summer Solstice: log-horizon.proboards.com/thread/6453/open-social-night-summer-solstice

Words: [280]


Total Word Count: 11651.4 words

Main Class AP Claimed: 46







Craft Subclass: Scribe



Craft Subclass Claims:

To Pen A Pen: log-horizon.proboards.com/thread/6556/crafting-pen
Words: [292]


Qanoon-e-Islam: log-horizon.proboards.com/thread/6558/crafting-qanoon-islam
[354]
[463]
[455]
Final Total: [1272]


A Scribe Teacher Appears Out Of Nowhere!: log-horizon.proboards.com/thread/6498/scribe-teacher-appears-mentor-private
Words: [359] + [25% Mentor Bonus]
Final Total: 448.75


Total Word Count: 2012.75

Craft Class AP Claimed: 8







Total Claim: 54 AP



Link to Previous Claim: log-horizon.proboards.com/thread/6460/1-noctis-ap-claim

Pre-Claim AP:

Main Class: 13 AP

Craft Subclass: 0 AP

RP Subclass: 0 AP



Post-Claim AP:

Main Class: 59 AP

Craft Subclass: 8 AP

RP Subclass: 0 AP



Final Levels:

Main Class Level: 20

Craft Subclass Level: 5

RP Subclass Level: 1




Requested Skill(s):

Tainted Charity
Tier I Skill

Miasma and Anima are two sides of the same coin and so it is no surprise that Miasma can be used to restore the body. This skill heals the target by a small amount. Its animation is fairly deceptive, looking very similarly to the Heal skill. If a target who received healing from Tainted Charity is not healed again by Tainted Charity within 2 minutes, all HP restored by the skill is immediately removed. This skill has a casting time of 2 seconds and no cooldown. Tainted Charity inflicts 2 points of Corruption on the target.



Spellwalk
Tier I Skill

A toggle skill that allows a character to cast a spell without forcing them to remain immobile during the spell's casting duration. It is an excellent skill to take for those who prefer an on-the-go strategy or at least a less vulnerable position. When the character moves while casting a spell, their movement speed is halved. This speed penalty decreases to 40% at Level 30, 25% at Level 60, and 10% at Level 90.



Oblivion Claw
Tier I Skill

A Heretic skill that conjures Miasma to shroud a melee weapon up to 1 meter away in a purple mist-like animation. It may also be cast on a character's bare hand, creating a purple mist silhouette resembling a demon's claw. A direct contact between the enchantment and the target's body deals minor darkness-attribute damage and places a harmful curse upon the target. When this skill is cast, the Heretic may select one of the following effects: [Increase the animation or cast time of this skill by 1 second], [After activation, increase the cooldown time of this skill by 5 seconds], [Reduce the duration of this skill by 10%], or [The user takes 5 points of Corruption immediately after this skill is used]. If a target was damaged by this skill, the selected effect will activate immediately when the target uses their next skill. After a curse was successfully placed upon the target, no additional curses may be placed unless the user recasts the skill. The animation and passive damage buff will remain, however. If it has been 10 seconds since this skill made contact with an enemy's body or equipment, it is canceled. This skill has a cooldown of 20 seconds, a minimum casting time of 3 seconds, and a maximum casting time of 8 seconds. For every second spent to charge the casting time, increase the curse's effect by 10%. A target currently affected by this skill's effect is treated as though their Corruption was increased by 5.


Eye for an Eye

Tier I Skill



A spell that places a curse somewhere on the target's body and it appears as an eye-looking insignia. The user can see from that insignia as long as the target is within 100 meters. More obvious areas means it's easier to see, but also easy for the target to notice it. If the insignia is covered completely in any way, nothing can be seen. The user must close one of their eyes to see anything from the insignia. This skill has a casting time of 5 seconds, a maximum duration of 30 minutes, and a cooldown of 1 hour.

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PENDING

There are some issues that I have found. First, the format of your post needs work. For each thread, you should have a total number of words that your claiming for that thread on top of any bonuses that come with the thread. For example, the CA threads give a +10% bonus for each person in the thread. I would suggest you see either Hiro, Capsules, or even my AP claims to have a better idea of how they should look at least to make it easier to grade.

Including all of your bonuses, I have 10493 words for your main class which would equal 41 AP. For your crafting, I have 2012 words which equals 8 AP. Also note that your AP rounds down, not up. For example, the exact number I got for your main class AP is 41.972, but you always round down.

[Noctis Corvo]

-Fixed the organization of the claim
-put in word counts per post

[Data Holder]

Just a moment.

For the threads labeled [Messier Sage? Looks Clean to Me!] and [Real Historical Battles] I'm getting some fairly different numbers, based on your number counts for each individual posts. For reference, [Messier Sage? Looks Clean to Me], you labeled as 706 Words, before the bonus. I'm getting 646, before the bonus. For [Real Historical Battles], you listed it as 2617, whereas the number I got was 2557. Now, I can't say that this is a major difference, but it's enough to warrant mentioning. Perhaps we could look this over?

[Noctis Corvo]

I looked it over (by which i mean i went to the threads in question and copy-and-pasted my posts into a word document) and the totals still seem to be adding up to what I put down. Not trying to call it into question or fub anything, I can even screenshot the whole thing and post it if you would like. I'm just not so sure where the problem lies?

[Deleted]

I'm getting the same numbers as Noctis for [Messier Sage? Looks Clean to Me!] but get 2615 for [Real Historic Battles] which was close to what Noctis had. Not sure why you're numbers are off, DH.

[Data Holder]

I figured it out. My error, and I do apologize for it. After having looked everything over again, I realized that Noctis was putting [117 Words] for certain things that should have been [177 Words] instead. Since that's all cleared up, and I feel moderately idiotic for having such a simple problem occur, this claim is okay.

Approved.